I was a Year 6 student at Hay Park School in Auckland, NZ. I was in McCahon Class and my teacher was Mrs Kingston. This was where I shared my learning.
Our class had a blog and you can visit it by clicking here.
This is my first 4 sentence recount. I would like to share it with you guys first. Its about what I did in the holidays... Pretty much just playing minecraft.
Hey Sinead, I enjoyed reading your amazing blog post about MINECRAFT!! I play minecraft too, but it's been a while since I've been on my PS3. You have made a few mistakes through your writing, for an example you have to write endermen instead of endemen. I have a question, in the picture through the middle, have you ever made diamond armour without using creative mode? I have, just to make you suspicious. I hope you had fun playing minecraft, and come to my blog to see my last posts : hpslylem.blogspot.co.nz
Hey Lyle, Thank you for commenting on my blog. I really appreciate it. I have actually made full diamond armour on minecraft with no cheats. I now know that you like minecraft alot! I am a minecraft gamer as well! From Sinead
Hey Sinead,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your amazing blog post about MINECRAFT!! I play minecraft too, but it's been a while since I've been on my PS3. You have made a few mistakes through your writing, for an example you have to write endermen instead of endemen. I have a question, in the picture through the middle, have you ever made diamond armour without using creative mode? I have, just to make you suspicious.
I hope you had fun playing minecraft, and come to my blog to see my last posts :
hpslylem.blogspot.co.nz
Keep up the great work,
From Lyle
Hey Lyle,
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog.
I really appreciate it.
I have actually made full diamond armour on minecraft with no cheats.
I now know that you like minecraft alot!
I am a minecraft gamer as well!
From Sinead