My blog comment on Kereru Creators Blog!

Hi guys,
I posted a comment on KereruCreators Blog!
They had and awesome sleepover so I decided to comment on their blog post about it. I asked a lot of questions! If you would like to comment on their blog click here!
Also here my comment I posted for them!

My Goal Setting For Term 3!!

My First 4 Sentences Recount

This is my first 4 sentence recount. I would like to share it with you guys first. Its about what I did in the holidays... Pretty much just playing minecraft.

Term 2 Reflection 2015 SM

This is my reflection hope you enjoy

Backward-Looking:

What have been your learning highlights this term?

My Highlights for this term is the Soccer Skills and Geometry

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Inward-Looking:

What were your Learner Profile goals for Term 2? Have your goals changed? Are you on track to meet your goals?

My learner profiles are to be balanced! My goals have changed a little because I am al most getting there for my balanced goal to be out of the way. I am on track to meeting my goals because i am almost there!

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Outward-Looking:

If you were the teacher, what comments would you make about your learning so far?

My comment would be to work harder and never give up.

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Forward-Looking:

As you look back at your learning so far, what's one thing that you would like to try to improve upon?

I would like improve on everything so I can be a perfect learner

Quad Blogging and My Blog comment!

Hi guys I saw this amazing

4/06/17 SM Our beautiful night sky stars

NAME: Sinead DATE: 4.06.15

SPEED WRITE: INFORMATION REPORT ON STARS

Today’s learning focus- WALT to write an information report on stars in 40 minutes.

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My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading/title:
is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)
My opening paragraph/introduction:
says what my report is about in a clear way
gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification
outlines the main features of the subject
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject
give detailed information (factual descriptions)
include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found

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Begin Writing Here:

4/06/17 SM Our beautiful night sky stars

[Introduction]

Hi, Today I will be talking about the star’s Birth and other things! Hope you enjoy it and get to read through all of my facts or information for you. These may make you interested in stars!

[Paragraph 1 -Birth

The parents of the star is gravity! Gravity was the one who created the stars. First they start off as a cloud of gas. Gravity then starts connecting to the gas to make helium. This will carry on until the star is finally made. This carries on with the star’s lifetime!

[Paragraph 2 -Types of stars]

There are lots of different types of stars. There are the Blue star, Yellow star, Black star & the White Star. The Black, White and Yellow stars are practically a dwarf. A dwarf is a small star. Some stars have names like Rigel, Orion Hunter,Orion Nebula & Betelgeuse.

[Paragraph 3 - Appearance]

The brightest star is Sirus and the second brightest star is Canopus. Some stars are small like the black dwarf and the white dwarf. When a star is dying they start to change color into white then into dark which may seem to you it has disappeared. These stars are not always the same color because of the heat temperature. The brightest star (Sirus) Is the first star you will see!

[Conclusion]

Now I see you have read and finished it to get to here. I hope this has given you enough information to make your own report on stars! Please share the information to everyone around you and make sure you carry on searching about stars because there are more information about stars that you may not know!

Why does the moon look upside down?

This is about Why the moon is upside down! I hope this will explain everything and please comment below if I have any mistakes!

WALT: write an explanation  for why the Moon looks upside down

Week 6 Term 2 2015

Copy the link for your original report here: CLICK HERE

Why does the moon look different everyday?

If you are wondering about the moon and you want some information you have come to the right place. The extraordinary asteroid (the Moon) has lunar phases. These are the phases (New Moon, Waxing Crescent, First Quarter,Waxing Gibbous,Full Moon, Waning Crescent and Last Quarter.) If you want to know more you should carry on reading! Enjoy the rest while you can.

Some people think that Earth has given the moon the shadows, so there are like the Crescent Moon, Gibbous Moon all the other moons AKA Moon shadows, I will tell you the truth, It is actually the sun you gives the shadows because when we are orbiting the sun and the moon is orbiting us it sometimes gets in front of us and lights up one side while the side that is facing us is black which is called a new moon.

The moon has different phases which are amazing because they give great shadows and makes you think on how you would like to see the moon in front of you. That is the kind of feeling I get. Sometimes I would look through the telescope and see the moon. If you would see it it has this shine but how does it get its shine. It gets its shine from the Sun’s reflection. You guys might want to know what I am talking about. The sun reflects its light to the moon and the moon shines as bright as the sun during the night.

Now you guys might be thinking when I will be done. Well I am actually done! If you guys think this was helpful please carry on finding out more facts and show what the moon is actually about. Make the moon special and talk about it and show what the truth is! If you want more facts about the moon Search this! (http://www.primaryhomeworkhelp.co.uk/moon/facts.htm)

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My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading: Why does the moon look different everyday?
is the question WHY DOES THE MOON LOOK DIFFERENT EVERY NIGHT?
My opening paragraph/introduction:
introduce what my writing is about in a clear way
hooks the reader
clear topic sentence and supporting sentences
2-3 sentences maximum
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
clear topic sentence and supporting sentences
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject
give detailed information (factual descriptions)
include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
connectives and time connectives
descriptive language
formal language
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found
write an interesting fact